The Vicar wrote:But the Tales of the Freighter subplot doesn't work without the "squid". All by itself, the TotBF stuff will be pointless.
Won't it?
I would say "Freighter" works without the squid. It's a counterpoint/parallel to Veidt's hoax. In each, a supposedly good man becomes a ruthless murderer in order to protect a larger number of people, and finds his goodness cannot survive such violence. While the film's conspiracy doesn't parallel "Freighter" as neatly as the book's, I think I think it still work with the Dr. Manhattan hoax. We didn't get any of that deep guilt coming off Veidt in the movie, though, at least that I saw. Just some more lack of expressiveness from Matthew Goode. The real question for me is, without the newsstand, where's the departure point for showing us "Freighter," anyway?
Question - I keep meaning to ask this and always forget. It's off-topic here, but I'd better mention it while I remember to do so.
In the comic, The Comedian discovers Veidt's plot purely by chance when, returning to the USA by airship (I miss the airships), he sees undocumented behavior on the island where the squid is being created. He somehow reaches shore and investigates, learns the basics of what's going on, and as a result, cracks. Not very plausible, but as plausible as much of the comic. In the film, Nixon's paranoia has reached the point where he has taken to bugging not only the White House, but many other buildings, including Veidt's complexes. The Comedian is monitoring these bugs, learns of Veidt's plan, and cracks.
How plausible is it that the smartest man in the world, running a vast research program and associated megadeath conspiracy for years, wouldn't sweep his complexes for listening devices regularly, even DAILY? Wouldn't have security that prevented anyone from carrying in a bug, if not wouldn't have equipment to interfere with listening? Forget my dislike for the framing of Dr. Manhattan. The dumbing-down of Adrian Veidt, at that point, dropped right off the graph for me. As played in the film, Veidt is much more full of himself than in the comic. He's an arrogant ass, but he's not foolish and not arrogantly stupid.